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PLEASE DO NOT CLAIM MY WORK AS YOUR OWN OR USE IT WITHOUT MY PERMISSION!
Took this photo on December 31, 2013 during my last hiking trip of 2013
Taken at Pine Grove Furnace State Park in Gardners, PA
Photo By: Me
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3000x2250px 6.07 MB
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This image wasn't exactly outstanding to me while I was browsing the critique-able deviations. The trees and foliage are chaotic and it's rather hard to make sense of. Furthermore, there's a lack of near objects. Everything is jumbled together at a distance. Although these woods are definitely beautiful, I don't feel like the perspective is terribly original or inventive. Overall, the image is confusing and lacks the depth and richness I want it to have.
The color scheme is also rather uninteresting. It seems to be halfway between a kind of depressing, desaturated look and a lively, vibrant look. This unclear tone is confusing to me as a viewer. I think you're trying to point out the chaotic nature of, well, nature, but I don't sense any definite intention or meaning.
This image could be better if you took more liberties and extremes with the objects at your disposal. It's a rather ordinary shot. You wrote that you took this on a hiking trip, so it would be nice if I could experience your journey vicariously through the image - if your adventure and emotion sprang out of the picture.
I hope that's helpful.